Wednesday, May 4, 2011

My Fictional Story

Once upon a hot day, a girl was running down a dry dusty road. She was too lost in her search to find her long lost side kick that she didn't notice rain pouring on her. Her clothes turned to much mush. The ground thundered beneath her feet because of the heavy rain on the dry chapped earch. Even the dead sage brush seemed more fresh. The sky thundered and the lighning clutered up the blochy sky making the full effects of a serious storm coming.

She kept on walking even though her black leather boots were sucked into the muddy ground with every step she took. If anybody was on her trail they wouldn't have any trouble finding her 6 inch deep foot prints. The water didn't soak into the ground which was made of patches of dirt and sand. Instead it stayed mostly above the earthen ground forming a swamp land farther than the eye could see.

First her ankles were touched by the iritatingly cold sandy water which made it even harder for the young beauty to sluge through. Soon the water was up to her knees, then her waist was swallowed up by the murkey waters. Only a few minutes passed before the monsoon forced her to swim for her life. A large tree that was probably struck down by lightning floated past her and the cold, wet and frightened girl grabbed hold of the trunk and clung to it for her life. The wind began to pick up making small ripples at first then ocean size waves. The girl though as skinny she looked, was very buff. She had had experiences surfing before but decided now was not the time to sharpen up her skills. Then a killer wave rammed her off of her log. That was when she realized she was in the middle of shark infested waters with no land in sight. She promised she would get herself out of this as she reached out for a branch off of a tree and slipped into unconsiouseness before getting a firm hold on it.

The young girl awoke on dry land yelling her sidekicks name, then fell unconcious again from dehidration.

*****

The water could go over her head and she could drownd. This is what was going through raspb.'s mind as she watched an enormously large wave wipe her friend and sidekick off of a tree and back into the watery grave of many that could not help themselves. But I can help B.O.B., But I must act fast. So she yelled her sidekicks name and dove head first into the cold murky water. Stunned at first by just how cold the water really was, she had to pause only for a moment to catch her breath but every moment she spent was almost not fast enough to save B.O.B.

Reaching the tree that was just barely uncovered by the waves rushing by she waited for her sidekick, B.O.B. to drift closer so she could reach out and grab her. The moment came and she dove in after her favorite sidekick. They latched onto each other when they got near enough and floated about in search of land of some foreign object that could hold them both out of the water. The next thing she knew, both her self and her uncounsciouse sidekick were being fished out of the flood. These were not any ordinary fishermen. For one thing, they were really short. They only came up to Raspb.'s knees. For another thing, they were green. I didn't have much tie to reflect because all of a sudden I heard a loud thunk and then I felt the floor rise up to greet my face with sweltering pain. And then there was nothing. With both girls uncounsciouse, the little green like smurfs bustled about to return to their homeland.

Raspb. opened her once beautiful brown eyes just in time to see a little green smurf converse with another green smurf about which route to take. They seemed unconcerned about the two humans that lay on the deck of their ship. Then almost as quickly as it had started their conversation ceased as on rather puney smurf came up to the other two and pushed a big green button on the console. suddenly a flash and then there seemed to be a force field surrounding this ship, and I got the sensation that we were flying and now instead of greyblue sky it was stars as far as the eye could see. We are in outer space thought Raspb. The punie smurf turned and notieced Raspb and gave a command to another standing nearby and they knocked us unconscious again.

****

Upon waking up, B.O.B. felt something foreign in her mouth and began to choke on it. Opening her eyes wide in surprise to see her very own sidekick RAspb.!

"Hurry and eat this. It will make you well. Come on! We haven't much time!" She urged stuffing yet aother spoonfull of yellow sludge into her mouth. Releived to see Raspb. and pained by their journey, she forced herself to swallow spoonful after spoonful. "Ok. Thats enough." She heard RAsp. say. "We have to get you changed. We are getting out tonight. I think I've found a way out." Of course B.O.B. didn't know what her sidekick was talking about on the account of being unconscious the entire trip. She had no clue as to the green smurfs that had shipwrecked her and her sidekick and their whole crew on this strange inhabited planet unbeknownst to man.

So I hurriedly dressed relieved to find my speciall made boots were still in tact. This was only because her feet were too big and shaped too different from the smurf colony that had taken them captie. Her clothes had been washed and her boots even shined at least this species of men-smurf know how to do a good spit shine. B.O.B. was a code name given to her at a significant time in her life. About the time or shortly after, herself an dRAspb. became sidekicks. When they did everything together, and when they were apart, they learned the great lessons in life as well as friendship.

She stood after lacing her boots to find a doctor blocking her way. She knew it was a doctor because he had a scalpel like instrument in his paw. He was planning a disection. She was planning an escape, but wait...where was her sidekick now that she needed her most? For she had gone to scope out the hallway. So she did the only thing she knew how. She glared her fiercest glare at him, but he stood unmoving. She didn't panick but became confused, why didn't it work? It had never not worked. Then the doctor collapsed at her feet. She grabbed her pack and headed for the door. This time she was encountered by a small green smurf. His head came to the top of her knees if that. He spoke into a ball in his hand, words which could not be understood by the human ear, so he handed her the ball and when she took it she understood perfectly that he intended no malice, but he was helping her to escape, but he had to leave also. Since the fall of the captain, nothing had gone as planned. He had been trained in the art of magic and mind manipulation. He uses this ball to speak for his toung was cut out to slow down his magic spells by his rival whose name can not be pronounced by the human tounge. But we shall call him Ruell or Evil One.

B.O.B. found that by asking a questionk, it was answereed in her mind, but this was only possible when she posessed the ball.

"Where is Raspb? WHere is my sidekick?"

"I will take you to her."

He started up the hallway but no Raspb to be found. Then another hallway and a stairway until we were sure we had eluded all bad guys. They didn't stop when they did, B.O.B. remembered her sidekick again and knew something bad had happened to her. So she thought this and then looked at the smurf of a reasuring answer, only it just looked me strait in the eye and said/thought "Lets get out of here!" For a split second I thought it was you. Then I remembered you weren't prone to change colors on me.

We ran strait into some quick sand four days we sank and trudged slowly down and across the amazingly strong grip of mud. We were quick to sunburn under the red hot sun. We had given up our attempts to escape the mud. We were surprised that nobody had come out and captured us but I figured they were waiting around to see if I would use my special boots. I wasn't about to give in and I wasn't about to die either.

Within the hour it began to pour rain. It rained up to our heads and made the mud even softer. We finally wiggled out of the mud. We had to swim in the top of water when we got tired. It was still raining when we reached the woods. It was midnight when we found a dry place that was high up to sleep for the night. When we woke up there was a strange figure above us. It startled us. It was a statue of a Buda God. He was so ugly. It startled us so bad that we ran so far and so fast that we didn't know where we were. We were in the middle of nowhere. All of the sudden the smurf asked me "What does your sidekick look like?" She described her and the smurf said I think I saw her back ther ewhen we were running away. They started to go back looking for her sidekick. They saw someone that looked like her called her name. She turned around but it wasn't her. So they kept walking. Soon they found temselves being chased by people holding golf clubs. The smurf was too slow so he got caught but the girl didn't. When she turned around to talk to the smurf she found herself



They took her to the hospital and she fell asleep. When she woke up she was choking! She opened her eyes all the way and saw an oversized nurse standing over her with some yucky pudding in one hand. She had a spoon in the other. She is trying to force feed me!

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